Monday, July 14, 2008

*8th activity ^^

Title play: Treason among lovers <3
Characters:

Giuseppe aka joe main character

Julie-Joes gurl

Octavio-Joes bestie

(Joe walks in)

Joe: oh what a day! the sun is shining, the birds are singing, and best of all i get to see my dear Julie. [:
what a great day! (smiles)

Julie: such a nice day but oh what a shame! =< ><

Julie enters 

Joe: hey boo, how you doin?
Julie: hey joe [: im ohk just very tierd (0_0) what about you?
Joe: well so far today is great. ;] hey! i have something for you, so close your eyes.
Julie: i dont think this is the rite time....
Joe: its more then a perfect time. trust me! please close them.
Julie: (resigns) but i... oh... well ohk
Joe: hold out ur hand

[julie holds out her hand]

(joe puts the ring on her finger)

Julie: omj! this is your favriote special ring! i cant accept this.. =[
Joe: dont be silly! i love and you love me and i wanted to give you something special from the bottom of my heart. <3
Julie: Im speechless.... i dont think i can accept this. i dont deserve this..
Joe: what makes you think that love?
Julie: listen we have to talk... its import..

[ring!!!]

Joe: its lunch time, you gunna come eat with me?
Julie: no, i have to do something.. c ya later k?
Joe: ohk.

(kisses her cheek)

while walking down the hall way, Julie bumps into Octavio

Octavio: Hey Julie! have u seen Joe?
Julie: yes i have. he went to buy some lunch. 
Octavio: did he give you your gift?
Julie: You knew?! 0.0
Octavio: well of course i knew. He told me befor he decided he give it to you. Do you like it?
Julie: yes i do but i dont want to accept it....i dont deserve something so special... 
Octavio: why do you say so?
Julie: oh well its nothing. Hey can you do me a favor? 
Octavio: sure. what is it
Julie: well i really dont want to hold on to the ring so can you hold it for me?
Octavio: I dont know.... i really dont think Joe will like that very much
Julie: Oh come on. im sure he wont mind it... i hope. Anywho, i just need to get some things together. So, can you do me the favor? (0_0)?
Octavio: well alright. but what will i tell Joe?
Julie: make something up. i gotta go. thanx. bye.

Octavio: I have no idea what just happend ><

(octavio caches up to Joe)

Joe: hey man whats.....
Octavio: is something the matter?
Joe: what are you wearing?
Octavio: what do you mean what am i wearing? clothes duh!
Joe: no i meant on your finger!
Octavio: oh well Julie told me to hold on to your ring. she said that she was afraid she mite lose it and asked me to hold it. Odd huh?
Joe: what?! why did you agree? why?!!
Octavio: She wouldnt stop bothering me about it. Practically begged for me to hold it. I was actually coming to give it to you. She said she "had something to do"
or something like that -_-
Joe: what shall i do? does she not love me anymore?
Im so lost and confused!! I dont know what to do! what should i do about this octavio?
Octavio: try and listen to what she has to say. Do not jump into any conclusions..

1 comment:

A1 said...

5/5 You completed the assignment.

Jazmin, it is customary when writing to leave slang out, however since you have chosen to mix some 'ghetto' elements with the intellectual ones, so, I will chalk it up to scene and characterization.

Thanks
Mr. Shakespeare