Thursday, July 10, 2008

Letter to the capulet. #7 assignment


Palazzo Capulet
45 Via
Figliapersa
West Verona, IT 10001


Casa Montague
2333 Via
Rubicuore
East Verona, IT 20002

Dear Capulet,
I regret to say that your son Tybalt is deceased. I witnessed your son and Mercutio getting into a quarrel earlier this very day. What started as jokes and silly insults ended up in a tragedy that not only stained Tybalt's blade, but also Romeo's. Romeo went after Tybalt after he saw that his dear friend had died. Romeo got his revenge by killing your son. This terrible incident could have been prevented if  Tybalt would have been raised as gentleman.

I do not mean to accuse your son because he is not at fault. Tybalt died because he was not being a good christian and thus the parents are to blame. I would really encourage you to teach your children how to be better Christian's. But you are not the only ones whom I blame. Juliet is also to blame for the commotion because of her sorcery's towards Romeo. Because of her, Tybalt disliked Romeo even more and wanted to kill him or in other words make him a "grave man". 

I know that it is very hard to believe that you are not as good a christian as you claimed to be but sadly, it is true, you are not. Please try and teach your children to not fall for the sorcery's of women and to be better christians. Also, teach the male children how to be better, and polite, gentlemen. Help your Juliet to be more respectful and to not make anymore men drunk with lust like Romeo. That is all. [:


  Thank you very much for your time.

Sincerly,

Jazzie fray
4782 olive juice street
alabama city, PA  67123

1 comment:

A1 said...

Palazzo Capulet
45 Via Figliapersa
West Verona, IT 10001

Casa Montague
2333 Via Rubicuore
East Verona, IT 20002

Dear Capulet,
I regret to say that your son Tybalt is deceased. I witnessed your son and Mercutio getting into a quarrel earlier this very day. What started as jokes and silly insults ended up in a tragedy that not only stained Tybalt's blade, but also Romeo's. Romeo went after Tybalt after he saw that his dear friend had died. Romeo got his revenge by killing your son. This terrible incident could have been prevented if Tybalt would have been raised as gentleman.

I do not mean to accuse your son because he is not at fault. Tybalt died because he was not being a good Christian and thus the parents are to blame. I would really encourage you to teach your children how to be better Christian's. But you are not the only ones whom I blame. Juliet is also to blame for the commotion because of her sorcery['s] towards Romeo. Because of her, Tybalt disliked Romeo even more and wanted to kill him or in other words make him a "grave man".

I know that it is very hard to believe that you are not as good a christian[caps] as you claimed to be but sadly, it is true, you are not. Please try and teach your children to not fall for the sorcery's of women and to be better christians[caps]. Also, teach the male children how to be better, and polite, gentlemen. Help your Juliet to be more respectful and to not make anymore men drunk with lust like Romeo. That is all. [:


Thank you very much for your time [^_^]

Sincerly[sp?],

Jazzie fray[caps]
4782 olive juice street
alabama{caps?} city, PA 67123


Jazmine,

there are no citations from "Office of Christian Parents". Please add those. Otherwise the letter is very good and meaningful. Please make the mentioned corrections and add the citations. The current grade is a 3/5. If you chose to correct it- it could be 4/5 5/5.

Thanks
T